I enjoyed the way the author built the story to take the reader along on the journey. Hope to see more.
the story was great. It developed into a type of love story and did not go right for the kill with quick sex. Only wish it was written by a woman who experienced it. I prefer real life experiences.
Doesn't get any better. The play of the two ladies was intiment and sexual.... yet believable.
believable and sexy,i've often thought of a high school friend
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