All Comments on 'Hard Fuck By My Master'

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L.A. WickerL.A. Wickerover 20 years ago
GREAT

great story, you guys work well together

Sir GalahadSir Galahadalmost 13 years ago

The sex was good S&M sex, but you need to learn more synonyms for "vagina." This is especially true if you are using "Cunt" as the character's sub name. My experience is that said word is best used sparingly because even today it has shock value. Overuse of the word reduces its shock value to banality, which is so not what you want to achieve.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great

This made me cum in my panties.

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Throw out the word cunt -

Write like an adult.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

How many orgasms are a weeks worth wood, if a woodchuck could suck wood?

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