All Comments on 'Blue Blouses'

Nice little story. It?s good written, funny - and hot !

I'm going shopping!

His way with words can tickle your senses. Making you thirst for more, he leaves you entertained. Many times aroused... His words penetrate in many ways.. That's the sheer talent he pens.

I thought that your story was very erotic and hot although it was a bit short. I hope that you do a sequel. Blue is my favorite color.

Nicely done, I felt like I was in that room with you and that woman watching from behind the mirror or something course when that announcement came on about the blue light specials on the blouses it made me think of KMart..

Very descriptive!

well this definitely adds fire to my fantasy of getting it on in a department store...nicely done.

Thanks Art

Some people have all the luck. I wishing shopping was this fun for me. Very enjoyable story.

When I sent you the thank you letter earlier I called you sweet... This just increases my thoughts in that direction! What a touching story! And yeah- I wish shopping was that fun for me too, but I guess it's a little too hard to find dressing rooms in the craft section.....

spoilt by basic spelling/grammar errors e.g Tail (what animals have at rear) vs Tale - a story