All Comments on 'Brobdingnag Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
First rate erotica and writing!

Goodgawdalmighty, what a real "pleasure of the text". It is an inspiring fantasy, more for my sex I believe. Loved the language, sentences, phrases as only a literary maven can, but also the images generated in my mind's lascivious eye. Write more like this, por favor. Perdita

ffreakffreakabout 20 years ago
Swift would be proud

I think you've done an excellent job of capturing the language and tone of Mr. Swift. And the end of the chapter is as natural and satisfying as it could possibly be. Let us see chapter 2 as soon as you can.

Colleen ThomasColleen Thomasabout 20 years ago
Extraordinary

Ogs, you have outdone yourself. Truely a tour de force!

Lady LayLady Layabout 20 years ago
Excellent!!!

Ditto to Perdita?s, ffreak?s, and Colleen Thomas?s remarks, looking forward to Chapter 2. Lady Lay

Lady LayLady Layabout 20 years ago
My appologies!!

I'm not sure what happened to my vote, I rated it 100 but it came up 50, I hope this over rides the other vote Og, your story was delightful. Lady Lay

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101about 20 years ago
Amazing

That was amazing. It was funny AND erotic, and seemed to copy the actual efforts of J. Swift. I am also looking forward to Chapter the Second.

SlickTonySlickTonyabout 20 years ago
Jumping on the Bandwagon...

Excellent! Very credible sounding--Ogg has the style of Swift down very well. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Delightful!

I felt as if I was reading the actual tale (just improved with a bit more lustful adventures).

Well done! More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
That was swell!

Totally engorging!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Extraordinary

The writing is excellent and captures Swift very well. Indeed, I would have paid more attention in class so many years ago, if this chapter had been included.

Give us more!

WillsWillsabout 20 years ago
Ingenious

Well done venerable Ogg. An ingenious addition to Gulliver worthy of an entire compendium. Many thanks.

Will's

OldnotDeadOldnotDeadabout 20 years ago
Eloquently done

Ogg,

Delightfully written with a wonderful capture of Swift's tone. I echo the previous readers' enthusiastic comments and am anxiously awaiting Chapter the Second.

OnD

Clay TannerClay Tannerabout 20 years ago
Most excellent

Once again, the great Ogg delivers. This is truly a tour de force - and it comes powerfully close to surpassing the master.

Alex De KokAlex De Kokabout 20 years ago
Mighty images from diminutive stature come

Og,

there is little this poor scribe can add to the praise already laid upon this work, yet must I say, "Well done."

Alex

sailorm72003sailorm72003about 20 years ago
Excellent

Well done Ogg, thoroughly enjoyed the tale. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
A excellent little read...

I've read a few attempts to expand on Gulliver's Travels, a couple of them focusing on Brobdingnag or Glumdalclitch. This one balances the erotica with the style better than any of them. I'm going to have to check out your other work now... :)

-- Grildrig

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great!

gr8 work! really, ok ok.. you knew that by now, but its really really nice!

EdscribblingsEdscribblingsabout 10 years ago
Keen Historical Account

This adventure is immensely satisfying from a scientific standpoint and so it baffles me that some readers vote less than five stars. (though I wouldn't be completely shocked if those people had a Yahoo or two lurking in the family tree)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow

True fantasy!

And there are 5 more to go

Yum

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I read the wrong version of this book as a boy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Did you read "Little Everyman" by Deborah Needleman Armintor or Asimov's annotated version since Leroy Yerxa of Sept. 1946 "Amazing Stories" to have inspired Arthur C Clarke's Prior art of "Princess Leia" adapted as a comic book "Shock Suspense Stories #3"

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