All Comments on 'The Double D's Play D&D'

This was a very good read as I was entertained throughout. I thought it was hilarious and sexy even with geeks. I also played some D&D back in the day and wish it were half as eventful. Smootches to the author.

it was great like all your work thank you for the good read.

I've been gaming for years, still do, and I LOVED this story, I must say I've never had a game as fun as that, but me & my Fiance are thinking about basing adventure off it now (how's that for geeky?)

Above & beyond the humor, the writing was well done, I found the dialouge belivable & realistic, sometimes a rarity with the stories here. Awesome Job

I play D&D, still do now and again and this really made me smile.

Cant wait for their next session lol.... Keep up the good work

Fantastic story!

If only D&D was like this when I used to play. :-)

Like many others here on this message board I too played D&D, but unfortunately I never had a session like murray, david, and adam did with the "Double-D's". Nice touch, keep up the good work.

I used to play D&D in high school, and I do wish the play had been this great back then. Ah, if only... :-)

Writing a long drawn out story doesn't make it creative!

I don't know why this wasn't an editor's pic. What is wrong with those people?

3.5 is the best edition ever. Too bad this wasn't up to date, but it was still a great story.

Next time consult the Book of Erotic Fantasy (aka the D&D sex book).

Yes I am a purist.

Hey Tasker

Don't listen to anyone that says your story wasn't good. Someone said it wasn't good because it didn't stick with the D & D sex guide. Screw them. It was creative and hot. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next adventure.

i wrote the last comment and had it as a fifty on the thermometer, i meant it to be a hundred.

I never played D&D, but I still enjoyed the read...it was fun. Hey didn't we all want to nail the cheerleaders, back in school. Why do you think they became cheerleaders in the first place?

Another fan here. I guess we all read the wrong rule book when we played. :)

I love all your stories. Up until now I thought you were great now I see you are a God.

Being a D&D fan myself makes the story even better.

I hope you continue writing a lot of these great stories and sequals to this one will be most appreciated but many.

Dear George,

I have read every one of your stories and I gotta hand it to you, you got a gift. Your not like a lot of the other writers who seem to be jacking off to their own story and therefor jump straight to the sex, you set the scene, like in your "Mike & Stuart's Excellent Porno". Anyway, thanks for your most recent edition,

Your biggest fan,

Alex

Mate, this was just awesome. I very rarely read a story on here from start to finish, but this had a bit of eveyrthing. Your characterisation and scene setting was great, and the sex (when it came) was hot. Well built up, and you definitely delivered at the end.

I wasn't expecting much when I came in (seeing it in the humour category), but really did enjoy it. As a fellow D&D player myself, I can only hope that a session one day goes this way.

Keep it up, and I for one will keep reading them.

I have read everyone of your stories George and I love everyone. Do one more this George, I loved it

I loved it. I have played D & D, Marvel, Rifts, ETC and would love to see more of the Double D's. Thank you!!!!

Lovely story. I found it funny, and being a D&D fan myself, more than a little like a wish come true. Excellent work.

Title says it all, though two questions:

Do you plan to do more like this, the Cockweasel the Goblin adventures? Please say yes

And where exactly does this group meet.... :)

Despite the extremely irritating attitudes of the two main characters, the story was fantastic! If it wasn't for the constant sloppy typing it would have been perfect! Clean up the English a bit and every line will be a gem.

Not only was this story making me laugh my ass off in several places, it was a lot of fun to read. Nice fantasy. I have actually come close to having something similar happen, only with one girl, and she ended up killing the game by taking the DM out of it with her impatience for sex. lol!

Never played D&D, so had no idea what was going on, but the story was mightily funny and impressively erotic

That was excellent, i don't read many stories on here, but i'm always looking for your latest exploit, keep up the good work.

Funny and hot all at once! I've got to read more of your stuff now.

Probably because I don't know the D&D game, but didn't make an interesting read.

Brilliant piece of literature man! The whole damn story seemed so long, but this shit is so fucking good that 5 pages just wasn't big enough. Keep this stuff coming man, maybe a 'Part 2'?

Like the Double D's themseleves, I can't wait for next week's adventure either! I'd love to see what adventures in fucking the DM can come up with a whole week to prepare.

Excellent story man, I?d like to see

part II!

i loved it.. part 2!!!!

The people have spoken! :)

would love to see and read another

I love all your stories, but this might just be the best.

Any chance of a sequel?

Why did this never happen when I played D&D?

Stupid, ridiculous, poorly written, boring, and unoriginal apart from the setting. Utter rubbish and humourless, unless of course you think a geek fucking a cheerleader is funny. Oh yes, ha ha. I'm splitting my sides.

Complete waste of time.

People who vote this high have absolutely no idea.

Twaddle!

that was a great story. i haven't read your work in a long time. i had forgotten how good of a writer you were.

One of the very best stories on the site. In fact, it's the only one I've read more than once. That's how hot it was ! Definitely deserves sequels.

Please write asequel - this is the best story on this site! (And I don't even play D & D)

Enjoyable and very erotic.

Too much game playing and not enough fucking. I was asleep by page 3.

Definatly requires a sequel! Their next weeks game!!!

Need a sequel.

Perhaps with the rest of the cheerleading team?

From a former Cheerleader and also LARPer. I found it quite amusing. However I think the cheerleaders should have at least had one orgaism. Also the fact that the GM Went anul is hard to believe as it being his first time. If you are a Real Role Player then you should be able to tell a more believable tale.... But none the less I did enjoy the read laying in bed with my legs spread. ;-)

Actually funny and erotic at the same time. I disagree with those who say it's badly written, I found it moved along briskly and the sex was written in the correct whimsical manner. Great stuff, I'd love a sequel as well!

The story was great. I have played a few games of D&D in my time, and the girls can get a bit suggestive with their comments. I can well imagine things getting out of hand if we had a bit too much to drink while we play.

to the guy who said he fell asleep cuz there isnt enuf sex. damn whts wrong with you? this is one of the hottest stories i have ever read. problem for me was that after page 4 there was a big gap and then page 5 started off much later...... i want to read the whole thing.. can someone fix it up?? thanks.

I think the DM should have ended the session with a winged demon grabbing both female characters and whisking them off.

Then, as the DM, you'd have to play a solo adventure without the two geeks. A solo with two cheerleaders!

Read it all the way through and was very...."satisfied" at the end :) Loved the way it went, just started off a little slow. Fantastic!

i've been playing d & d for many years now, and have yet to get anyone to play the sex convincingly. your story was wonderful fun, and quite erotic. i'll grant the slow start - and i'll give you the small criticism that you should edit a little better (for grammar, etc). otherwise, a jolly fun romp!

This story is well writing and so original I was going nuts. Havn't read as good a story as this in years. There should be a sequel. They can't play next week at there house because mom and dad will be home. So the game gets moved to some ones house. That would be a new guy and the girls bring along a girl friend and lets play another D&D game.

Muy atractiva. Adoro su escritura. Usted es un escritor muy bueno. También, cualquiera que paró de traducir esto tiene la manera demasiado tiempo libre y necesidades de tener el sexo.

I just didn't find it humorous at all. Unless you counted on others perceiving the "stereotypical dumb cheerleader" schtick as funny, I think this would have been better served in another catagory. I don't know why some people think that any woman with more than a B cup is an idiot, but you did your own characters a disservice. By the way, a natural 20 on a d-20 is a critical hit, and would have done a hell of a lot more damage than 3 points. Might want to brush up on the proper use of apostrophes, as well. Your constant misuse was distracting.

I'm a roleplaying lady, but rather than critique the accuracy of the "dumb blond big boobed cheerleader" or the specific accuracies of the game, I'll say that it was a hot story and I enjoyed it a lot.

this story is so hot, i'm really impressed, i've read quite a few stories on here but this is definitely my favourite, it's funny but really turns me on, good work

I loved it. perfect for game nerds like me. ever thought of writing another story, perhaps the double D's can play strip magic the gathering?:)

YES

When i played D&D years ago it was never like this!!!! excellant story. starts slowly then really builds....

Sexy & entertaining to boot!

That was fucking hilarious! Makes me wanna dust off the ol' players handbook and invite some girls over.

man.. ive jacked off twice to this story, today... lol this is my FAVORITE story on this whole website. youre a genius.

I enjoyed this story very much! Thank you! I guess it's probably a geeky gamer thing, but i just love the humor! (However i felt like some of the rules weren't being used correctly, like was it 3.ed or AD&d they were playing? But i'm not so geeky as to not allow you some creative license)

it was ok... the cheerleaders didnt seem believable, and the game seemed a bit messed up with some of its abilities and the like... so doing some research would have probably helped there, maybe making some of the personalities more believable, even in the case of the geeks, might have helped with the story

i keep reading this story. you rock!!!! please write more like this dude..

I've spent many a weekend playing D&D - from Friday night often all the way through to Sunday afternoon, with shjort breaks for snooze time or munchie runs. I wonder what our games would have been like with a pair of 'D's?

A thoroughly entertaining story, I laughed my ass off through most of it, and chuckled for the rest! Good job

Lots of laughs, and hot too. <p>

Our D&D sessions never went anything like this, sadly :|

As a Female RPG gamer, I must say I'm glad I'm not that gullible. I am very entertained by your story. Think you referenced 3rd Edition or AD&D, but felt the flow of the game play was perfectly placed, & the female charaters couldnt have possibly figured out 2nd Ed's Thaco anyway. (lol) TYVM for the entertainment..d_mentiadiva

I've been playing D&D for about 25 years and never been in a game this good! This is one of my all-time favourite stories. Thanks for a great game! :-)

I was really impressed with how believable the gameplay was, the characters not so much, but The story was awesome and that's what counts

If only D&D were like this in real life, and not just a load of sweaty nerds like me sat round rolling dice =D

Please write another one, This is one of the hottest stories i have read on this site. As D&D player for the last 10 years, this story blew my mind.

As gamers, I've noticed such people as D&D players are some of the most honest people on earth; they know its fantasy, they immerse themselves in it, and everyone knows this. That's what I admire about them.

Too bad DDO sucks balls so completely when it comes to pvp.

Seemed more like FATAL than DnD Amirite?

best story i ever read but what about the dragon? ~_~

That was a great read: simple and involving so much cocksucking. :)

:-)

There is a part 2 coming?

Mature Women gamers are much worse, then geeks about slipping sexual comments in.

never had a game like that, but have gotten handjob at the table, and sex with something some of them, individually

That was absolutely fantastic, is there gonna be a part two?

Please make a part two!!!!

super story deserves followup great to be a nerd in this story

hot andd hilarious..i cant believe they fell for that!

you should make a sequel where the whole cheerleading squad comes to play, you absolutely must!

I play d&d and i wish it worked out like that!

I want next part

We want more

Good story, well written. It actually takes it time to build up the setting instead of being only about the sex, and not many authors take the time to do that. Glad you're writing, and keep up the good work. I also wish that it would be more like this when I play. And a sequel would be great, I'll let you decide what it would be about. Good job.

dumb shits ha

... hell of a session ... !

:-D

very well written story well paced and worrthy of any penthouse or adult mag out there hell it was better than most thank you for a great story

This was the hottest story I've read in a long time.

I love to read Devon and Danelle taking on D&D 4e!

Or the New World of Darkness

Great story, as good as any ive read

From a former D&D geek this awesome and makes me wish I had thought of something similar back when I used to play.

The girls never came.

I would love to read their next adventure

when did you'll release the next chapter?

I think I almost came! Two things I love combined - Sex and DnD! I wish this was a real quest in DDO. Sure I play a Paladin, but I think I'll survive without an armour ;-)

fucking hell, so hot. never played d and d but that was so fuckin awesome.

Iwould love to read a continuation of this story. Please please please write more.

Some of the dumbest nights of my life were spent playing D&D with a group of dorks who were obsessed with the rules but didn't know how to have fun. These girls definitely got into the spirit. I would definitely have preferred the story if they'd had orgasms too but still I spent the entire read jerking off like crazy. It was definitely hot!

good sex but the humor is heavily lacking, and seeing of how this is in the humor genre i gave bad rate.

What doesn't work about part 2 is that they prolly gave a report on how the guys made them have sex. The teacher will prolly tell the double ds and they'll get pissed for being taken advantage of.

If you want the girls to have Orgasm copy the text to your computer then add orgasms into the story. People seem to think erotic stories are engraved on stone by God (God in this case being George Tasker, try not to let it go to your head George :D) and scanned onto the internet, you can change the story on your computer to fit closer to your fantasies what whatevee those maybe. Its funny that on a site filled with erotic parodies that people see these stories as immutable.

As to a Sequel I'm totally in favour of one. These girls may be dumb, but thier no way they'll risk thier popularity admitting they fucked Geeks, so they'll just leave that part out. So easy. Alternately the teacher could decide to join the game himself.