All Comments on 'Ecstasy Of A Kiss'

Delicious. You're quite the writer.

This is an akward read because you keep switching back and forth between first and third person. Maybe if you italisized the first person narrative it would flow better. Otherwise it wasn't too bad, but I didn't understand the time line and it wasn't very (if at all) arousing. However, it is nice to read something that sounds like you actually care for women.