All Comments on 'By Your Altar'

by Icingsugar

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RybkaRybkaover 20 years ago
Nicely Alliterative

A joy to read out loud with very few weak spots. Thank you for the poetic experience. >?(((><

AngelineAngelineover 20 years ago
This is excellent Ice

an urgent erotic poem that is either about a person or a country, maybe both, but terrific either way. :)

jthserrajthserraover 20 years ago
Wonderful...

Wow, I love playing with rhyme and word sounds, so I loved reading this poem. Wonderful rhyme, internal rhyme, near rhyme, and alliteration. Amorous Ankles indeed! Inspired and inspiring.

jim :)

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
AN INCH TURNS INTO A MILE

with smiles and us. TK U MLJ LV NV

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