All Comments on 'Surrogate Farm Ch. 07'

by Ianb

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
slow

i dont mind the story,but it is slow and drawn out and to

short for each episode.

SxysimleySxysimleyabout 20 years ago
Great plot development!

This is a wonderful story! great plot development. it could be longer but i just love the turns and twist. keep it coming hard and strong.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
dirty trick...

sinse my mind is not so good as to finish this story, I would like to at least see a couple of more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
One day with more skill you might try and put this

into a real story instead of quick jerks that yank the reader around without going anywhere.

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