All Comments on 'The Gimp'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Who's who in Whoville?

Couldn't figure out who was doing the narration. It was almost always in first person, but constantly shifting from person to person. If it had been written better it would have been more enjoyable.

judokastjudokastabout 13 years ago
Excellent story

This was quite a good story. Fresh, erotic, happy..all consensual..makes one want to spend time as a Gimp!

KumquatqueenKumquatqueen17 days ago

Beautifully constructed story. Lovely to see a hot fetish story emphasising consent as well as all the sensory experiences.

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