All Comments on 'Exhausted by Hubby Ch. 01'

by angela146

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RUSTYSKINSRUSTYSKINSabout 20 years ago
Needs more....HEAT!

Well thought out story...just needs some heat to. Work that voice a little show me the money baby...take it out and make it frothy...thanks, good luck.

angela146angela146about 20 years agoAuthor
More heat...

The heat is actually in chapters 3 and 4. Chapters 1 and 2 are the buildup.

Chapter 3 is already recorded and will hopefully be up next week. Chapter 2 isn't voiced yet. Please be patient.

Thanks,

Angela

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Nothing held!

Please, do tell all, don't hold anything back! The listeners want to hear all you have done. The listeners want to hear all about what your going to do!

tonyjamestonyjamesabout 20 years ago
not hot enough

needs alot of real hot taboo type fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sounds great so far;

Was quite intreguied by this story; and could'nt stop until i had finished this segment. On to the next in a minute- powers willing to let me that is.

Please let it out; exciting,steamy,and very much the turn on. Feel like i'm actually in this ..not just a bystander. thanks, Jamie

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Awesome beginning

Ok...so really; have you been inside my head lately?. I thought I was the only one who thought like that. lol. Great start and awesome build up. Keep it this real and you'll keep us (me and my husband)reading. Cheers

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