All Comments on 'Hands So Soft & Warm'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Let Your Hands Roam On Me

As you entered into the story, it was like being hypnotized by your voice. Even though the voice wasnt around. I felt your hands massaging my back and the tenseness eased away. Then the teasing was so erotic, it was torture. I melted.

Terrific work, but next time make it with You in control. mmmmmmm.

KrystalWynterzKrystalWynterzabout 19 years ago
John is every woman's fantasy!

How many men do you know who will live out an entire fantasy, satisfied by making the woman he pleases shudder in ecstacy, with no release of his own?

I know you're my fantasy! And I'm in need of a massage ...

MissSensesMissSensesalmost 16 years ago
Intense Massage

In one word.... "Goosebumps"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
dialogue

I have mentioned to other writers, u need dialogue or it isn't quite good.

darkravenwolfdarkravenwolfabout 4 years ago
Damn this is hot.

The thought of a massage leading to this is absolutely perfect. Have you thought of making this into an audio? I for one would love to hear it as one.

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