All Comments on 'my beach mamas'

by sandspike

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
nice

very descriptive, enjoyable poem :)

WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
I like this

Good job on the poem but when I go to the beach this summer I'll be on the look out for you. lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Tank tops bending over for bread.....

sand in the sammiches......I smell the suntan cream. Lovely little poem

Lalenya LoveLalenya Loveabout 20 years ago
Evocative

This poem recreates not only a visual image but the emotions felt by the viewer as well.

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