All Comments on 'womanly'

i'll take the milk and sugar

poured over fresh fallen snow

scooped with long fingers

defrosted in my mouth

blind

i must close my eyes

to read your words

is the only thing that seemed out of place to me. It's entirely esoteric, so not easily recognizable to lots. I personally had to look it up, thus my opinion of such. Delicious poem anyway.

your poetry jabs me (in a good way). It's like I am reading something, but something else is actually on the page. You have an off beat word play that I have not been able to get to work for me. I'd copy you but can't figure out how. Nice stuff here...

jim :)

I should of been a cowboy. Loved it.