by Icingsugar
that's a violently sexy little poem you wrote there pal. These sprees of yours together make a book--a good one. You do know that, right?
Ok one nitpick. Might be my ear, but this sounded rhythmically off enough to make me stop reading and say "huh?"--
and wrap your calm
in form of arms
around this man shape
cactus thorny
carelessly horny
overloaded oddity
I'd do this (just a suggestion....)
and wrap your calm
inform of arms
around this man shaped
cactus thorny
careless horny
overloaded oddity
(Note that I did a "Rybka" to "inform" hehe.) Anyway, you know I love these word sprees you skid onto your computer. :)