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April, 1983 -- A Slow Drive on A1A

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by WickedEve02/16/04

Oh, oh, oh!

lol Well, that's the first thing I thought. I've never listened to audio on lit before. I decided to read along while you read. I'm sipping my spiced chai tea and listening to your voice. (Great voice. Call me sometime.:)) And you really do read this poem superbly.
Ah, back to my tea.

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by Rybka02/16/04

A Good Poem

The care with which you read the last four lines is the effort that should be put into speaking all of this poem. It is too good not to be annunciated with emphasis and timing. Speech should add to a poem.
>(((>

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by Icingsugar02/16/04

Traffic stopper?

Cool sexy flashback there, Jim. :)

I have to disagree with Rybka though. I feel that the slightly hectic tempo and rolling rhythm in which it is read is exactly what makes it tick. But that's probably my very personal perversion . ;) I rarely listen to poetry read out loud, since I feel that it often drags its feet too much.

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by 02/16/04

Sweeeeeeet!

Reverie in traffic. Nice poem - jim - beautifully structured and performed.

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by Anonymous05/14/04

nice touch...

well written...I liked it before I heard it...
In fact the hearing distracted from the beautifully written flow of the poem itself...for me.
I have to say it blew me away when I read it...good work.
I pictured the sea becoming form and sexual partner and melting back into the receeding tide...
That's some image... perfect, sexual, sensual ... I can't say enough. Just thank you for such a great thought...s

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by LeBroz01/01/07

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And that's what happens when you day dream.

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