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by Joseki Ko

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Dr_VladDr_Vladover 18 years ago
exquisite!

I love the way you expresed that state in such a few words! I only say it because I've been through that, too. Thanks!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
clarity defined.

A haiku of defeat that ends on an optimistic note. Very clear and succinct. Illustration aids clarity.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
~~

I don't know ~~ is it senryu or more zappai? Have to think on that one a bit.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
BUT NOT IN THIS LIFE

the next will have to do. TK U MLJ LV NV

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