by Big Swede
enjoyed the story I suppose after 2 years you have decided no part 2 a real pity
Hello big swede,
your novella pleased me. I find it so good that I would translate her gladly into German. I would not like to hurt your copyright. Therefore I ask you to allow me the translation and publication in a German Storyboard. Please answer me by Mail, if you agree with it. If you should not agree, I can understand that and your decision would respect. Please answer by Literotica author contact: Nucleus
Friendly greetings from Germany
Nucleus
*whats about continuation of the story ;-)
And I hope to read that she did get pregnant and as her unsuspecting hubbie takes care of her lovechild that he thinks is his one evening; she again succumbs to other men.
The girl's a cock-hungry slut. Her fiance should have fucked her when he had the chance. Now his best mate is going to laugh in his face the rest of his life - especially when the kid turns up
DUH...Hey you should see Tom's hairy dick...it's huge...dumb ass hick. I'll bet you are the kind of husband that is smart about making money and DUMB as hell about women. You have the kind of wife you deserve. A slut whore. Every dumb add clueless SOD should have one..You also have a small leaking always little peepee and you cum in two strokes.
then married the big dick the took her virginity and probably impregnated her. But no she will stay married to the idiot who let his new wife wander off and be a slut that fucks men on her husband. A shame some of these cant be eliminated from the gene pool so that the cheater gene eventually dies off.
its only 6 years and u never wrote the second part of this story, love to see it.
Never actually got married, engaged to a guy named William for awhile, but never married.
How stupid, "He has a big cock; I can't help it; I've got to have it."
She was a virgin and his giant cock just slipped in, ooops. RIGHT! I think this plot was a little loose and stretched out.
you don´t seem to end a story. Most of your stories stop "to be continued"...only that that never happens..
The marriage got annulled so their is no more story. No man would stay with a slut and risk all kinds of diseases that you would be bringing home. Adios!
this same sort of 7-minute itch. a girl can't be faithful FOREVER! As for a possible pregnancy, well, that's what marriage is for, to legitimize the offspring!
is jelly, wishes the fat cock would've reamed him out, the sick fuck
Let me guess. In the sequel the new bride finds her husband and Jack somehow doesn't notice that she doesn't have a cherry, that she is so stretched there is an echo, and he does not see or taste the quart of cum pouring forth. She starts her wedded life buy comparing Tom's donkey cock to her husband's normal tool. Nine months later she is able to convince Jack that her mixed race baby named Tommy is the result of an old secret in Jack's family. There is no good ending for this story except for an annulment. Or Big Swede could make a Broadway musical out of the whole story. Like a modern version of "Benny's from Heaven".
Your storie got me hard as a wood pool.
Love it thanx again for the previously mentioned wedding tale.
Nothing is worst than a cheating wife in her wedding day...Hoe low a woman can get?
You hate this category so why are you here you fucking turd? It's a fucking story you fucking pondlife.
Man, this story sucked big time. At least make it somewhat believable. Erotica , my ass.
I have waded through lots of stories; some have lots of sex..but they are disjointed lack something. Inspite of all the sex in them they dont attract so much interest or arousal.– its not always one comes accross stories like yours......can be a fine line sometimes..a balance
Dont listen to the negative stuff on here...just keep to your style and your own genuine ideas,, however small...like 'lightning illuminating her ass' (in one of your other stories)'
You have a great way of telling some of the stuff too....so dont stop : )
This author writes some stupid shit. And some call this erotic? Fucking takes all kinds of perverts and weirdos in this world.
she is a virgin and gets broken in by a donkey dick, she would be screaming her head off and torn open, bleed like a stuck pig and rushed off to hospital for emergency surgery. Plot unbelievable.
Actually, many women don't bleed at all. Don't believe the stories, get to the real world instead :)
Why would anyone while getting sucked off by his girlfriend tell her about his best friends big cock? They wouldn't.....Also why is it that the little prick can never be a good dancer and every time the big dick is Fred Astaire,,,go fucking figure! And this young bride ....well she is future slut fodder! I can see part 2 being about the slut and her now cuck husband! I would love to read about something that really happened and not good guy bad guy or should I say big dick and little dick! Same old same old!
Only thing big about this story is how ridiculous and stupid it is. Another writer fixated on making wife a shameless slut and hubby a clueless cuck. Just another idiotic tale from a writer who only can write about cheating wives and clueless husbands. Yes you are just a one trick pony boy.
The priest that married us, had sex with me that night and again the following morning.
He would call to our apartment every Saturday evening and have sex with me.
It was a fantastic feeling knowing that my husband would encourage me.
i loved the story and gave it 5 stars. The fact that the bride fucked the best man while giving him a lap dance in a private room at her own wedding reception does not bode well for the longevity of this marriage. I cannot wait for the follow-up to this story. Does she get pregnant by Tom? Will she tell her husband. Will he ever find out? Will she keep fucking Tom after the wedding reception? So many questions. Enjoyed the short story though.
Gave it 1 star. Was too brief, nothing into the give & take on the dance floor, before, or after with Tom's best friend. Look for part 2? Where TF is it? Too tired to write it? For what's here, doesn't need a part 2. If you write/ post a story, do an entire effin one or none at all. -- Bob
Weird but believable. My fiancé fucked nine of her former boyfriends the night before our wedding, and now, years later, she's remained faithful ever since.