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well done!
purrs* i can't speak for anyone else, but i thought it was delicious...
Wow!!
Very hot story!!!
Mmmmmmmmm
It made me cum several times, I wanna keep this story =P
Delicious
Mmmmm what a great story. More please...........
more please
Me and my wife compleatly enjoyed the storyand would like some more ideas please
Thankx
Yummy
Very good...hot, well written...and to the point!!! :)
woah..
well written.. descriptive enough to make me wet.
mmmmmm tasty
got thats awesome, i could stroke my cock to that all day mmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Nice
It was nice.
Sugoi
This story was written very well. It was short, but left me satisfied. It wasn't stupid or rushed by a horny person, and didn't contain my pet peeve of people yelling curse words as they masturbate. It also had a believeable story and portrayed the schoolgirl Eve as a very real person without practically screaming, "She's a super mega hot horny bitch" so to speak. You even gave her a name, unlike a story I recently read where a person continued to refer to their spouse as, "my lover" which really got annoying. Good job. I look foward to reading any of your other stories again and again, as I have this one.
I loved it!
Your story made me instantly wet. I loved the realism that so many other writers lack. Well done!
Very good
And I usually don't like masturbation stories at all!
Good, but...
She was 'frantically' mastrubrating yet she had the time to take off most of her clothes. When out in public i reckon you would probably keep ur clothes on. Just maybe...
Apart from that, it was good. Realistic, she didn't seem too much of an uber-babe/slut, more like. 'fuck i'm horny'.
I liked it.
UUUUNNNNNNNHHHH!!!!!!!!
im so hot now...i have to go mastubate and attack my little clit
wet :)
so wet right now .
straight and to the point!
Very good little story! Not too silly, and not bogged down with realism either. Definatly a fan!
Damn
Holy fuck... I'm soo horny now....
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