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Naughty Eve

byWindstalker©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/20/04

well done!

purrs* i can't speak for anyone else, but i thought it was delicious...

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by Anonymous02/20/04

Wow!!

Very hot story!!!

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by night_elf03/07/04

Mmmmmmmmm

It made me cum several times, I wanna keep this story =P

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by Anonymous03/08/04

Delicious

Mmmmm what a great story. More please...........

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by LouieNRhonda04/01/04

more please

Me and my wife compleatly enjoyed the storyand would like some more ideas please





Thankx

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by Anonymous04/14/04

Yummy

Very good...hot, well written...and to the point!!! :)

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by Anonymous04/24/04

woah..

well written.. descriptive enough to make me wet.

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by Anonymous05/12/04

mmmmmm tasty

got thats awesome, i could stroke my cock to that all day mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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by Lisa Denton10/14/04

Nice

It was nice.

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by Anonymous06/13/05

Sugoi

This story was written very well. It was short, but left me satisfied. It wasn't stupid or rushed by a horny person, and didn't contain my pet peeve of people yelling curse words as they masturbate. It also had a believeable story and portrayed the schoolgirl Eve as a very real person without practically screaming, "She's a super mega hot horny bitch" so to speak. You even gave her a name, unlike a story I recently read where a person continued to refer to their spouse as, "my lover" which really got annoying. Good job. I look foward to reading any of your other stories again and again, as I have this one.

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by celiacapiella06/03/06

I loved it!

Your story made me instantly wet. I loved the realism that so many other writers lack. Well done!

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by rkelly311/04/06

Very good

And I usually don't like masturbation stories at all!

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by Anonymous05/30/07

Good, but...

She was 'frantically' mastrubrating yet she had the time to take off most of her clothes. When out in public i reckon you would probably keep ur clothes on. Just maybe...
Apart from that, it was good. Realistic, she didn't seem too much of an uber-babe/slut, more like. 'fuck i'm horny'.
I liked it.

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by Anonymous01/18/09

UUUUNNNNNNNHHHH!!!!!!!!

im so hot now...i have to go mastubate and attack my little clit

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by Anonymous10/04/09

wet :)

so wet right now .

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by JackPW05/24/10

straight and to the point!

Very good little story! Not too silly, and not bogged down with realism either. Definatly a fan!

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by Anonymous05/17/12

Damn

Holy fuck... I'm soo horny now....

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