All Comments on 'Peep Mom Ch. 02'

Good story line but not enough descriptions and some not-so good spelling. Mom got her jollies but Tiff got stiffed. Ending was too abrupt. Needed Mom watching her Tiff really get her boy friend's best. Then after Mom recovered, have all 3 join in a daisy chain. Seems like there's at least one more sequel here. Thanks.

This was absolutely entertaining, because the atrocious writing made for many laughs, which I'm sure was unintended. Was this piece a parody

of something? I know you may have to look up some of these words.