by Dracthyus
Tasteful, yet very hot. I hope to read more about Marcie and Dan's steamy adventures.
Oh how I wish I could of had a grrrl like Marcie when I was in college. One very hot love story I hope to read more about Marcie
Your story was great. IF was so good I wish for that moment I was you. Actually for the moment I was reading it I was you. Truely a brillant story.
I loved the story. I can only dream about meeting a woman like Marcie some day, or even becoming a woman like her. Great job.
Way to cool, I loved it.I can't wait to see what else happens with them and much closer they could become.
Well written, with just the right amount of emotion. Well done! Keep writing.
guess Marcie isn't a lesbian is she? lol, you go girl! I loved it, you really captured a lot of the stress and fear of my transition.
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I second Bubblepopmei's comments - you captured the hurt and emotions that I have endured during my transition. If I could find a guy like Dan, I'd be a very happy girl indeed, lesbian or not!
A nice connection between these characters and some hot descriptive sex. Well done
I fell in love with Dan and Marcie's love story. Most sex stories here on Literotica are only about rough unfeeling sex, but this one has a real heart and feelings. I don't know if it's real or not but if it is I hope they are still together, this is a rather old story. I am also a transgender going through transition, very confused about my own feelings and although I don't have a roommate I have a classmate in college who I think I like. When I come out of the closet and become a woman around next year I hope he accepts me as Dan accepted Marcie.
Very hot! I love getting fucked and have taken my fair share of loads in my butt. The feeling never looses it's newness, but I'll never forget the pleasure of the first time I felt another guy's cock deep in my butt and knowing I had his cum in me!
nicely written and natural evolution for these two, esp. for Mark/Marcie-hot sex too- thanks
So beautiful and heart warming and passionate, they truly care and love each other, unlike so many other stories...
This was one of the best stories I've ever read! Continue it PLEASE!
Good story...but there is never ever a thing as too much lube. Spit and precum isn't enough. Never has been, never will be. Other than that, pretty good job.
Superb story! Such a wonderful concept; two male friends, one becomes the woman she always was, the other takes her as his woman. Seriously, one of the best stories I've read so far!