All Comments on 'Caught Jerking Off'

by FyodorKaramazov99

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Great Story!

Wow! That was hot! Good imagery and story line.

We're looking forward to Chapter Two!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Too good to be true?

Great combination of masterbation, oral, BDSM, femdom, lesbian, gay curious sex! Hard to do but it all comes (should that be cums) together in a tale that can take off in numerous directions. The heavy punishment was a little too much for me but the rest of the story whets my appetite for every kinkier adventures - whats next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great

Love all the combinations of sexual interests. Hoping chapter two has brother and sister fucking each other.

Mike

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Outstanding!

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great

Can't wait for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good beginning!!!!

To bad you did not finish.!!!!!!! Damn!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Continue

Wish I knew where this story went to next. I am sure that it would be very different and hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice story

I just wish I had some one like you but I do my lady next door she saw me in a a baby blue nightie and she made me her bitch now I have to be over her place every day one day she gave me pills she told me they will make my breasts grow and when I am done you will be mine sissy bitch for life and that what happen

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Have gone over this story many times. Wish that there was a part two, but that is up to you. If you have gone into writing this as an entire book please let me know so I may buy it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
If only.

If only you could write it would have been a really good story.

Good concept but awful writing.

He was a quick study? You mean he was a quick learner.

What is muling?

You need an editor.

Anonymous
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