by Icingsugar
More minimalistic than your previous spree poems. Different, but equally enjoyable.
the running flow of your run on words rolled nicely. A nice upbeat...
jim :)
This Spree. Reading this made the words flow like a stream. Nice work?especially this:
left or right?
coffee or tea?
do you want fries with that?
myplaceyourplacenoplace?
they plead
make up your mind