by PDumbledore
I like story alot and everyone is right he should make her pergnant write more
I'm sorry to say that this chapter doesn't live up to the previous one. It's getting less believable. She used "cock rings" to loosen herself up? Correct me if I'm wrong, but aren't those devices used on men? To help them maintain there hardness?
Your stories would be much better if your poor spelling didn't distract the reader.
That is bull why would this girl have sex with her brother worse story ever.
I really liked this part too. It was really hot, I think you should edit out the ccockrings part and change it to didlos though (only a mistake I'm sure) I really liked this. Her getting pregnant would be cool, but he is just 17 so I don't know if you agree.
This was hot got me super hard ;D also im needing help trying to find two stories that o can't remember the name of them or who the author was one of them was about a guy who went to like a big orgy with his girlfriend/friend with benefit and he seen his mom there while he was fucking and he knew she wanted to.join the other story was about a guy for his 18th birthday his sisters took him to a strip club and he ended up fucking one of them and it lead to more with the other sisters and a girl he was wanting to fuck from school. Does anyone know these two stories if so help would be appreciated
not that it matters this story goes back aways but my vote should be 5 stars
Wasn't even close to being as good as Ch. 1. Should have stopped there.