All Comments on 'Just a Touch'

or flash fiction, the distinction grays, but these words don't. There is a density here, some intriguing internal rhyme that smacks of poetry. Well done... The reading raises this poem to another level, the background sound and music enhanced the mood, and the flawless, empassioned reading was wonderful. Good, good stuff here.

jim : )

That was good for me. I have an odd desire to smoke. Please do it again!

I thoroughly enjoyed the poetry, but the audio was perfection...so many I read just don't make it with audio...but you have!

Beautifully written and read - performed, because it is a dramatic performance. Well done.

I sat back and imagined that you were doing it to me, and it was great.You also have a very smooth, sexy voice.........thoroughly enjoyed it..........kisses.........Dawn

Sexy voice. I am ready to turn away from 13 years of monogomy to cum to your corner of the universe. Your eyes, your voice, I need more than a supernova. I want to thrash beneath you. That was a very good one. Thank you.

Well damn that was excellent!

I loved all of it.

You have a VERY sexy voice.

The added backround noise was also great.

for making our night. 4 Horny Broads

The poem is great but the reading makes it. SO sexy. I don't know how this is for guys, but watch out girls! Spare panties recommended.

of you leaves me breathless.

really diggin' this! the words just roll off your tongue so easy... wheeeeewww!!

Lesson learned from time immemorial ~ being a tease will do you wonders.

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Sexy af