All Comments on 'Mom I Love You'

I don't write comments, but you are the worst writer I have ever read. You can't keep your story line stright. You say something and then shortly after that you say something else. You leave out words and mispell words. My worst subject in school was English and I think I could write a better story.

please stop trying to write a story it sucks!

don't listen those assholes the only shit they want to read is stupid lesbian stories these story rules good going you did good

Terrible.. I agree with the last two comments. Although I give you props for putting yourself out there at the same time I wish you'd kept that piece of writing to yourself.

I agree that the writing is not the best, but the sex was hot. And as a woman who enjoys mom/son roleplay, I like the idea of a dominant but loving son who is not afraid to give mommy what she wants and needs. So I thought it was a good effort regardless of whether it is true or fictional. I will say that most of the stories I've read here are very poorly written. I wish there was someone to edit before stories get posted, but whatever...it's a free site for all to share! Thanks for sharing your story vishmech.

Ew

I'm a 19 year old man I'm so confused

These are important, pertinent questions that boys have to answer. Most boys, I think, would reply, "Fuck, yeah!" This is an excellent story by an accomplished writer. I simply can't understand the ignorant negative comments. Vishmech, please ignore them. This and your other stories describe in detail how a boy lusts for his mother's mommy-hole, that wonderful hole between his mother's legs that gave him birth; how a mother sees a big bulge in her boy's pants or a huge tent under his fly, and how her motherly cunt leaks like crazy; and how her boy sticks his young prick right up between his mother's legs and finally unloads his young balls up where his warm creamy semen belongs. Just keep on doing what you do so well, vishmech, and your faithful readers will be happy.

Details... take your time... non of this I made her naked then I gor naked crap!!

I like a vocal mom. It really turns me on to hear someone telling me to fuck them harder. I've wanted to fuck my mom since she started getting vocal during sex. Hearing her made me jack off pretending I was the one fucking her.

get an editor. Spelling and grammar mistakes make for a lousy read.

Learn to speak English mush!!!

Study ENGLISH if you wish to publish in English.......