All Comments on 'Comet'

being a romantic flavored with a taste of Monet adoration, I just had to love this line--

when my soul exploded

shot like stardust

rained like flowers

lovely Lin, truly enjoyable read :)

i heard the perimeter

of a hundred breaths

I love the first part, actually the entire poem is good. I'd make a few small changes, though. Your last line should end with does and not do, unless you're trying to rhyme it with you. I'd drop "shiver" and "penetrated." They're not needed, in my opinion, and they slightly interrupt the flow.