by KarenAM
You're quite talented. You managed to leave me breathless, and they only kissed.
First rate writing - hot without a single one of the "dirty" words
Takes you out of the ordinary. Great writing. You seem to know people better than most.
It's so cool to hear other peoples falling for the life, cold steel and crome but a whole lot more! great story!!
This was a wonderful way of really getting to the heart of why so many women LOVE the feel of a Harley. And more so the men who ride them. This was great! Made me remer my first love.
This is an excellent story. My tastes are usually more hard-core, but this drew me in and held me through the last word. You sketch the characters so vividly and really capture their relationships and interactions. It's a wonderful description of the power and sensuality of a big motorcycle and the man riding it. Her escape from a predictable dull safe life into the romantic unknown is inspiring. I'll be thinking about this story for a long time.
Lovely story, extremely tersely written, almost haiku all the way through. Sweet sweet sweet. This is craftsmanship.