All Comments on 'Summer Thunder'

by KarenAM

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
wow

You're quite talented. You managed to leave me breathless, and they only kissed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
erotica at its best

First rate writing - hot without a single one of the "dirty" words

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Fantastic

Takes you out of the ordinary. Great writing. You seem to know people better than most.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
its alive!

It's so cool to hear other peoples falling for the life, cold steel and crome but a whole lot more! great story!!

VayeneVayeneabout 20 years ago
I'm impressed

Just utterly brilliant. Be proud of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
FANTASTIC!!!

Thank you for a well-conceived story.

darkmaasdarkmaasabout 20 years ago
Wow

Anyone can bring fictional genitals together, but this is erotica.

Pop-OPop-Oabout 20 years ago
Breathtaking

Another fantastic story by you. Don't stop writing, ever!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Harley's....

This was a wonderful way of really getting to the heart of why so many women LOVE the feel of a Harley. And more so the men who ride them. This was great! Made me remer my first love.

KenJamesKenJamesalmost 20 years ago
Makes me want to get a big bike.

This is an excellent story. My tastes are usually more hard-core, but this drew me in and held me through the last word. You sketch the characters so vividly and really capture their relationships and interactions. It's a wonderful description of the power and sensuality of a big motorcycle and the man riding it. Her escape from a predictable dull safe life into the romantic unknown is inspiring. I'll be thinking about this story for a long time.

cantdogcantdogalmost 20 years ago
You can write, girl

Lovely story, extremely tersely written, almost haiku all the way through. Sweet sweet sweet. This is craftsmanship.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
liked it

it was really great

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