All Comments on 'A Poet's Singularity'

by sandspike

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TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Nicely done

With simplicity and well chosen words

I wish it was longer

thank you

LiarLiarabout 20 years ago
Cool reflections

I like it. What else can I say? No, I just like it. :)

SeattleRainSeattleRainabout 20 years ago
perhaps should be multiplicity

for some reason the cliches fit

like it is part of the whole point

I almost want to say "ouch"

you know what they say about truth

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
So true!

This is great and simple. I love it! (and it's so??clean!)

Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Miragealmost 20 years ago
Brilliantly worded!

The poem is enriched by the images each line immediately produces through the use of cliches. Each word, each line contributes to the overall meaning of the poem. I particularly like the line "warp speed through a cyber brothel." Great poem!

bluerainsbluerainsalmost 20 years ago
great write

thanks for the vote and I enjoyed visiting your site..this was my favorite...smiles/blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
When Thank You Isn't Enough

Kisses Sandy. And much love. This poet is honoured to be your subject...perhaps nude modelling follows? d.s.

quietpolyquietpolyalmost 20 years ago
perfect

Observation is the key to good poetry. You have done it.

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
black hole eh?

i'm prob in trouble then.

writing is an addiction..

anyhow i loved the way you brought the point across

i won't say ouch though..i have a devilish smile happening.

anyhow..ty for your visit and your words..they are appreciated, xo fawnie

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Very nice, enjoyed surfing through the black hole.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

A black hole?

Oh no, we're stuck at Lit

And have been sucked in

With creativity forever hidden.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
charting

Each poet pulls something from within and pours it out via the keyboard hoping his inspiration and natural abilities will be enough.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Oh what a 'web' we weave... here on Literotica,,

spurred on by the diehard 'Anonymous'

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Oh what a 'web' we weave... here on Literotica,,

spurred on by the diehard 'Anonymous'

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