by sandspike
With simplicity and well chosen words
I wish it was longer
thank you
for some reason the cliches fit
like it is part of the whole point
I almost want to say "ouch"
you know what they say about truth
The poem is enriched by the images each line immediately produces through the use of cliches. Each word, each line contributes to the overall meaning of the poem. I particularly like the line "warp speed through a cyber brothel." Great poem!
thanks for the vote and I enjoyed visiting your site..this was my favorite...smiles/blue
Kisses Sandy. And much love. This poet is honoured to be your subject...perhaps nude modelling follows? d.s.
i'm prob in trouble then.
writing is an addiction..
anyhow i loved the way you brought the point across
i won't say ouch though..i have a devilish smile happening.
anyhow..ty for your visit and your words..they are appreciated, xo fawnie
A black hole?
Oh no, we're stuck at Lit
And have been sucked in
With creativity forever hidden.
Each poet pulls something from within and pours it out via the keyboard hoping his inspiration and natural abilities will be enough.
spurred on by the diehard 'Anonymous'
spurred on by the diehard 'Anonymous'