All Comments on 'Pour Me A Fantasy'

by sandspike

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DustystarDustystarabout 20 years ago
Sensual Meets...

Between the obscurity of living and dying it is so wonderful to know that some of us still care to dream of visions.

Cheers to you, Sandy.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Simple words.

Intricate photo of a life. I can totally relate and I love it. Thanks for saying it.

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
No one knows

the thoughts that go through your head having a beer or two after work.

Thanks for bringing some of them out into the open.

my favorite way to ponder life.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Okay... a wonderful fantasy

I loved the way you carried the beer guzzling terms through the poem, especially the long necked amber woman. The pink neon was pretty good too. good work..

jim : )

Mia MooreMia Mooreabout 20 years ago
i likeyour style

enjoyed this one very much, even though I dont drink beer ;)

steve portersteve porterabout 20 years ago
interesting perspective...

...being a former bartender i sometimes write from that point of view...interesting to ponder another perspective...i thought this was great...thanks.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Saw the title and wondered if the poem could equal it. That and more.

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