by patty_parker60
The anal aspect of your stories really turn me on, as well as the domination and reluctance, then forced giving-in of the busty mature women. If only some of these adventures would happen to ME!
That last note was from frustration and a result of some really nasty, negative, insulting "advice" from some people. I owrk hard on these stories and was feeling a bit unappreciated. It won't happen again. I know that the majority of you do appreciate me.
And if the picture in your bio is really you, I'd love to paddle your fanny til it's nice and rosey and then hold your hips tightly for all that ranting you did.....
Keep up the effort. Your stories are interesting.....
if you dont like the critique dont submit stories
re: If you can't take the heat....
That original, witty rejoiner is simply too much for me to cope with, I've never heard such a creative, relavent come-back in all my life; what do I do now!!? How do I go on? My daughter sez...what do you expect from English pukes...
so sorry, forgot to add this last bit ....EAT A SHIT SANDWICH! (don't forget to lick your fingers, fuck-face!)
You are the BEST! Don't let that puny-dick fucker get away with his BULL-shit!
This woman does a fantastic job for someone is not a pro and is dedicating her time and energy to give some small enjoyment in your pathetic lives, since you can't get any pussy! You're probbly just pissed beacause she won't include men in the action-GET OVER IT! Read and enjoy the stories, or don't. This is directed to the complainers and whiners (see English pansies)
I don't quibble AT ALL w/your writing style; it works JUST FINE at making me horny & wet!
stays that way because of your fantastic stories. Every one of them is first-rate, no matter what anyone says. This bi girl thinks they are all great!
I may be a male, but that doesn't stop me from enjoying the stories. All stories are not for everyone, however. That being said, I don't know what these peoples problems are. If they can't get a clue from your nick name. I just don't know about some people.
I wish to extend my sincerest apologies for all the harsh criticism you have endured and commend you for pushing forward. People don't like what you write, well just say, " fuck them", and move on. Don't get all hung up over what critics say. Attaching value to their statements is a mistake, don't do it.
I think you are going all out to write your stories. Just keep writing how you feel and let the rest of them do their best to keep up. Please, please don't stop because some people can't understand.
Mine are criticised all the time - but I don't actually give a rat's ass...
One of these days I will deliberatly write a story that will give every criticiser a heart attack by beings so bad. Could be fun...
hey slut mom, u make me so hot that i want to shove my dick into your pussy and ass. i am so turned on by yur stories!!! and i wana fuck u soooo hard... make me hard baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fuck MEEE!!!!!! i will be at city extra in sydney NSW on the 11th of october at 10pm... come in and see me, we could get sumthin going... xxxx
Always the lover of lesbian fiction. Nice work on this one, I really enjoyed it. Got me hard at once.
love yer attitude refreshing to here freedom ring. Stories are good and intense . keep them cumming. And like you said if you fuckers don't want to read this shit DON"T. If you don't like porn or X videos don't go to these sights, watch or read something you like that we might not care much for , and don't bitch about cause it offends us. good work Mothafuckatrucka
I did like the final comment LOL yes late to the party but what the fuck!
Hot story! About your venting, you are right. Perhaps you could write some stories about the "standard's" people mothers, wives and daughters being submitted to every depravity, end lasciviously enjoying it all