All Comments on 'Brother Spanks Sister'

Sorry but it was not good it make it sound like her dad not brother and there was no talking

agree not good and it would possibly be better in the bdsm area no need for it in a loving relationship especially an incest one to easy for her to get mad and spill the beans about the relationship putting her brother in jail keep it realistic and within the boundries of human nature

of human nature??????Is the last commenter a fucking idiot?

ik heb mijn zusje ook geslagen toen ze jong was op haar blote billetjes

Good idea, but could have been fleshed out more. And even allowing for the differences in American English and British English, the misspellings and grammar errors were distracting enough for me that this fantasy story just never got going, or even seemed original.

What a croc of shit

Attrocious English!!!