You know I've no self control. Can't help but inquire. I loved this one:
Behind blue eyes is a woman
Soft and subtle, strong and bold,
Thinking of everyone but herself.
Whoever this is dedicated to has to be the Luckiest person on earth.
You multitalented monkey.
This is lovely. Lucky girl! It's me, isn't it? It's me I knew it. I love you too!
A depth and sincerity of feeling packed into such few words. Amazing!
Joining the others - I want to be her.
What a lovely poem - just as lovely as the writer. Your words always move me, Lucky.
I told you I couldn't pick a favorite. It wasbeautiful and sweet.
Crossing over from prose to verse and back again displays rare talent. You have both the lyrical ear of the poet and the descritptive prose of the storyteller. Mixed in wonderful measure. Bravo.
Whoever you wrote this about sounds like one beautiful woman, inside and out. It's a very touching poem. I loved it.
This special poem goes in my favorites.
I loved every line of your poem. Amazing! :)
A wonderful love poem from one woman to her other special woman.
This poem deserves praise for the passion bestowed in it. It moves like a stream and sets the imagination free! I felt like I was there!
This poem will have special significance to anyone who has every loved Someone with blue eyes.
thanks are due for the idea and broad format of this peom borrowed with acknowledgement for mine. gracias.
Ahhhh, but I have green eyes.
dont affect her demeanor, TK U MLJ LV NV
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