All Comments on 'Behind Blue Eyes'

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minsueminsueabout 20 years ago
So, are you going to tell me who?

You know I've no self control. Can't help but inquire. I loved this one:

Behind blue eyes is a woman

Soft and subtle, strong and bold,

Thinking of everyone but herself.

Simply lovely.

- Mindy

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEabout 20 years ago
simply beautiful

Whoever this is dedicated to has to be the Luckiest person on earth.

You multitalented monkey.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Wow Lucky!

This is lovely. Lucky girl! It's me, isn't it? It's me I knew it. I love you too!

damppantiesdamppantiesabout 20 years ago
A beautiful dedication

A depth and sincerity of feeling packed into such few words. Amazing!

Joining the others - I want to be her.

Honey123Honey123about 20 years ago
Wonderfully sweet

What a lovely poem - just as lovely as the writer. Your words always move me, Lucky.

jejtrnl25jejtrnl25almost 20 years ago
I loved it.

I told you I couldn't pick a favorite. It wasbeautiful and sweet.

Colleen ThomasColleen Thomasalmost 20 years ago
Crossing over

Crossing over from prose to verse and back again displays rare talent. You have both the lyrical ear of the poet and the descritptive prose of the storyteller. Mixed in wonderful measure. Bravo.

-Colly

StormyNiteStormyNitealmost 20 years ago
Beautiful

Whoever you wrote this about sounds like one beautiful woman, inside and out. It's a very touching poem. I loved it.

Lying EyesLying Eyesalmost 20 years ago
Beautiful...

This special poem goes in my favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Perfect!

I loved every line of your poem. Amazing! :)

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
~~

A wonderful love poem from one woman to her other special woman.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 17 years ago
beautiful

just beautiful

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Articulate word selections to inspire all!

This poem deserves praise for the passion bestowed in it. It moves like a stream and sets the imagination free! I felt like I was there!

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Blue eyes.

This poem will have special significance to anyone who has every loved Someone with blue eyes.

caringcadcaringcadalmost 13 years ago
thanks

thanks are due for the idea and broad format of this peom borrowed with acknowledgement for mine. gracias.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ahh

Ahhhh, but I have green eyes.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE EYES OF A BEHOLDER

dont affect her demeanor, TK U MLJ LV NV

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