All Comments on 'Your Turn'

You need to give classes on how to do that-- this story should be like a manual handed out to men! Phenomenal descriptions-- this is exactly what I want to think is going on in my lover's head.

And your prose is lovely, too! ;P!

This is amazing. This is better than a dream.

Wow.

Just wow.

Mmmmm. Nice. Yes! Just like that. Wish it was my turn.

Thank you. For writing this.

Interesting style, I would only suggest slowing things down a bit