All Comments on 'Mirror Mirror Ch. 01'

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damppantiesdamppantiesalmost 20 years ago
Cool opening

You did a very great job with the opening chapter. Now I'm waiting to see how this chain develops. :)

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
An excellent start...

a few hanging sentence fragments and one misplaced apostrophe, but overall pretty good. You might want to change dieing to dying, both are words, but with very different meanings.

I like the view of the world through the reversed image of the mirror, it will be fun playing with that... good stuff.

jim : )

AnnoraAnnoraalmost 20 years ago
Another fine endeavor by Art....

Once again your choice of matter for a erotic story line its just wonderful.

Keep us happy by giving us more.....

Joseki KoJoseki Koalmost 20 years ago
Sweet

Very enthralling, this is a good story line and a great story I can hardly wait to see what's next.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Ualmost 19 years ago
Nice

loved the way you sat this one up!! :)

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Well, well Well,,,,

Pretty good thus far...

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