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spin off
please write more about the mother,daughter and son it seems like it could be more interesting that way
very good!
that was a reallllyyy good storie.. i love the way you turned it in the end to get the mom involved :)) that's to good cant wait to read some more of your future stories...
Goddess
*Bows to the Goddess of Lit* Congrats on another excellent chapter.
Corrupting The Golden Children!!!
Fantastic story! Please write a spin-off or continuation involving the mother, Tara, & Aidan! Then the father can find out at the end of that one! Then, if you write an epilogue for that one, it turns out the father only likes to watch & fuck his wife but he never fucks Tara. That way, Tara & Aidan can still be in love & no other guy touches her! Just passing along ideas. Take care & I'll see ya next story.
-Jim
GRRRRR
Ok, you turned this story into a typical stupid, girl becomes a fuckin slut story. It was great when it involved just her and her brother, but you ruined it completly by adding another person into the picture. I read the first few sentances and was totally turned off by the whole thing. And to think i was actually looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
Why does it always have to become a disgusting threesome????? i mean, come on...
Disapointed!
Give me a break!
I loved the story up until the point when you put the guys best friend in the mix. Also, you know that guy would have had his cock in his sister from the get-go. And next time leave the fucking mother out of it. Like I said give me a break.
Hmmmm.....
I too enjoyed the story up until the friend got in the picture. I understand using him as a pawn to push the brother over the edge, however I felt that there are other means to push him over the brink. Having the girl become well, slutty to achieve her goals is all to commonplace. Apart from that I enjoyed it as I do most of your other stories. Keep up the good work!
nice, but a small request
very nice, but would you write a follow-up as to exactly how they were used as sex toys? If you will, please write me and let me know at strykemanson@yahoo.com . Thanks!
Humor
That good but no sequel needed.
Great story
I really enjoyed this story. However, I would like to know how a guys best friend from grade school never met his sister!
Master Piece
That was an amazing story. I'm not sure how I feel about the best-friend joining in, I felt a bit betrayed then, don't ask why I'm not quite sure myself. That and how Aidan was so quick to forgive her for that. I guess that's a good thing though, not many times I can read a story like this an get mad at a character. Superbly written. It takes more than just talent to write something like this.
ditto
the best friend joining in was like a slap in thew face and the way aiden forgave his sister so quick was unreasonable. also i think doreen should have left her husband she evidently wasnt happy.
Great Story!
Great story with a hell of a twist at the end! Maybe a spin-off should be in the mix.
Hmmm
Really enjoyed it A LOT... just didn't really like the twist in the end...
damn
dude thats fucking hott i really like it u need to do more to it its awsome
sick
sick story no real guy is going to go to his friends house to pick up his sister then when he gets there finds the two nude and join them in sex a normal guy would turn around and tell them to fuck off and leave especially if he has any feelings for her and knows his friend is an ass
mum
wheres the mums version????
I like it
I enjoyed reading this a lot. I think the twists and turns and the betrayal of ones own body. Author is definitely going on my fav list.
Ooookay
I totally did NOT expect that ending. I know it's not going to happen, but I want to know what happens between mother and children.
I can only hope!
Great story, Jessy.
Loved it, always will.
Graet Story
I have read this story several times and enjoy it more each time... Wish you add new chapter or chapters from the end... with mother & children
this is not about love
this is a story about a terrible girl and a used boy. It's for shure that you have no idea about true relationships. I'm a male and I would have told her where to go even had I loved her. This is just sick. all 3 chapters
So good!
Don't listen to these people complaining about bringing in John. Those people are probably men which wouldn't have minded if it had been a female Tara brought in. I swear it's a double standard. I think it was brilliantly done and loved the ending! Wish you could write more!
I loved the ending!
Ha ha... very unexpected twist at the end! I can't believe people had complaints. I thought the whole story was well written and fun!!
Wellit's sad story...
Aiden behave unrealistic, noone will forgive so fast. Onestly this story is no good. And why you involved other people: John and mother, it was unnecessary and and turn your story into something sad and stupid. I' m only glad that this isn't routine in your storys.
Great Ending
What an ironic twist! I do say that Aidan probably wouldn't have been so forgiving, maybe should have drawn that part out so it would work better, but still overall great.
This is a cuckold story? *pukes*
They get together after what she did with John??? If she had been honest to begin with she wouldn't have involved him like that. If she wanted Aidan for real she would not have done anything of the things in this chapter, he was falling in love it seemed, that's the worst time to "cheat" a girl can think of. That kills it all, and the forgiveness is totally unbelievable, would never have happened unless she had gotten home same time as Aidan instead of day after... I despise cuckolds, sorry. :)
The series was good up till this chapter
This chapter does not feel right, if Tara actually loved her brother she would not have done what she did at John's house. It makes the part where she confesses her love for him unbelievable, its just to over the top considering her earlier actions. That part ruined their relationship and this chapter.
Well done!
A creatively risqué & fresh tale that flowed rather well. The erotic story line has the reader enticed and craving more! It had parts of this reader giving a standing ovation. May I suggest the continuing of all the character descriptions throughout to keep the characters fresh in the readers mind in future tales. Perhaps other words of description so the rerun factor is not a factor.
Loads of lustful admiration to the author,
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