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by Anonymous

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by Lauren Hynde04/04/04

Simple...

...and beautiful. I particularly liked the aliteration in the fourth verse.

Shame about the CapsLock. :)

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by Tathagata04/06/04

just like

everything that's ever been said still lingers in the air still....so does love
beautiful work
thank you

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by Bill Dada09/04/05

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It is the scent that you can smell and you can not smell simultaneously. Very nice.

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by LeBroz12/31/06

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Now if you could just take out, "withering wilted," the piece would be perfect.

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by duddle14601/30/07

acceptance

Like the smell of faded roses ~ who can escape the love you can't forget.

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