All Comments on 'Myth Girl'

tragedy and heartbreak on a very human level - well done

didn't work for me the way some of your others have. You tell the tale here rather than show me. I think if you worked on presenting concrete images it would work better poetically. You tell me about the myth girl instead of showing me what she was like, making me feel the emotion instead of telling me about it. An interesting, tragic tale.

jim : )

look into the shadow worlds of hope and dreams and despair.

Love is always a double edged sword

Inherent in accepting it is accepting the pain it brings.

So sad and bitter sweet.

But we do need to be reminded of it.

Thank you for sharing