...reminds me of john prine...put it to music angeline...thanks.
folksy, thanks steve, thats the word I was looking for!! :)
as a youth I hitch-hiked quite a bit.
I decided that all drivers were the same person.
same fuel, same soul. Only the miles changed.
Scenery made me suspicious. Only backdrops between here and the next place. An awesome stage crew remains hidden to this day.
Me and Bobby McGee. I could almost hear Janis singing, "Freedom's just another word for nothin' left to lose." A wonderfully free feeling to this sonnet was enhanced by the unobtrusive meter and rhyme. Very good.
jim : )
Interesting topic associated with a more formal poetry type. *G* You know what I'm a thinkin' don't you. Once again, you show your "stretch." Excellent.
smell your perfume and hear your music waft over the assembly again.
Like walking into an exotic restaurant and smelling those spices after a long while away your poetry always has that homey yet exotic feel.
we can all say " Ahhhhhhh" but never reproduce the recipe
Good to see you again Ang
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