All Comments on 'The First Time the Earth Moved'

Very loving story, Sweet. Erotic too. and poetic.

Another nice story of mother natures sexual play. This was nicely done and I enjoyed it. Thanks (~_*)

out of the 182 strokes needed to get a 5 star story.

I love the extended metaphor here. An excellent scene with some not too subtle references. Very good, nicely restrained.

jim : )

Your story really defined what "Earth Day" is all about. I loved this story. Really beautiful!

This young lady puts out the erotica every person loves to read. What this world needs is more females who think and imagine like her. If human cloning is possible please clone this beautiful creature and order one for me. Thanks for each of your sub-missions.

Wonderful story! As always, this author has conveyed an incredible sensuality in her writing. Very different, and very unique! Well done!

elemental and powerful.... thanks

This was one of my favorite Earth day stories. A wonderful display of Earth's love. Nicely done.

Good use of metaphors and well fits the topic, Earth Day.

Well done. It was sweet and, of course, petite with a nice sexy, imaginative feel.

Rumple Foreskin

A sweet and imaginative story that evokes the mysterious sexual connection between us and the rest of creation. For that reason alone it should be an Earth Day winner.

Hi, Sweet. I really enjoyed this story, even the first time I saw it, and I have vetted it for inclusion in a volume of "Coming Together". I will be sending you an email or PM with some minor changes, typos, etc. that need to be corrected.

I loved this story. It was passionate and yet so gentle. Just perfect.