All Comments on 'Velvet's Little Red Riding Hood'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Very nicely done

What a great story... I suppose the only thing I would change is to word it a little more elloquently. I look forward to reading more of your writing... I'd love to read a vampire story from you. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wolves FTW

At last, a GOOD wolf story! It's so hard to find these when so much of the Nonhuman section is full of that vampire shit. And when I DO find a wolf story, it's atrociously-written or has this long, boring plot that leaves no room for sex. I'm glad SOMEONE remembers what this website is for.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love it

Loved your story! Thank you for a really wicked twist to Red Riding Hood.

NeverWinterNiteNeverWinterNitealmost 13 years ago

I love your take on Little Red Riding Hood.

Pixie87Pixie87over 12 years ago
Fab!

Love the wicked twist on little red riding hood.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great read!

Loved it, adults only take on red riding hood, enjoyable!

hurricane_tongue_Jayhurricane_tongue_Jayabout 12 years ago

Loved the wolf!! Little red definitely handled herself in this One...BRAVO!!!

sylentpoetsylentpoetabout 12 years ago
Awsome!

Do I see the beginning of a fariytale series? If not, you should think about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Amazing!

I can't believe nobody else has commented! This is such a great story, it deserves more recognition! Well done. Very well written. :)

UpHillAllUpHillAllalmost 11 years ago

Sweet and Hot! Thanks for writing and sharing .

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Red rides...

Incredible

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love it

How the fairy tale should have ended.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Gonna be honest.... not my proudest erotic moment

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