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by svelte walker

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YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Hands up

. . .If you understand this playful poem. It is reminiscent of the work of Mary Palm.

LiarLiarabout 20 years ago
I like that title.

Don't ask me why.

The rest is damn cool too. :)

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Oh, oh...

I am seeing a bit of the oddly erotic here. Love the minimal images laced so nicely together. I am not sure if you shaped the poem with a purpose, but I liked the overall curved effect when considered with the words. Nicely done...

jim : )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Interesting...

Would have to say its certainly open to interpretation, but if thats the case. Then <grin>

I remain, Thesandman

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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High marks for

Manual dexterity

With all the club's members numbering

One.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
uneven zeros...

I love the weird little word play that is going on in this poem. Perhaps I'll follow this poem's directions and just "sit, be quiet," and just follow the flow...wherever it goes. *grins*

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