All Comments on 'Only'

Oh Sandy...you make me want to bring out my harmonica and sing along with you. Tell you what, you grab a couple of longnecks and I'll join you on the front stoop as the sun goes down. We'll have some icy melon and some warm conversation about broken hearts as we watch the summer lovers stroll by hand in hand. Sound good?

clever rhymes here

simple but very effective.

I'm not big on rhyming poetry but i liked this alot

thank you

A cute little short poem.

The ending twist brings a smile.

rude/crude & solitude, it's not often I've seen those rhymes together. Nice wordplay...

jim : )

a lonely poem that I liked. Nice words spike, thanks.

the dark defined by light, very nicely done