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Silent Echos

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by Tathagata04/14/04

great use

of language once again.
A slide show of powerful images and feelings
nicely done
thank you

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by YDD04/14/04

Cenotaph

Sparse and tensely written.
I enjoy it when I have to look up an occasional word.

Are you sure "cenotaph" is just what you mean?
The dictionary meaning is basically a tomb/monument for someone who is buried elsewhere.
Perhaps it would be clearer to me if the final line began with "For" ?

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