by Celticfae
I really liked the story. I wish you would explain a little more about who "Ian" is and where Retrained in Basic is located. I could not find it!
Dustilee
This is one of the reason why I love Literotica! I asked for help and got it. Thanks guys! Hope everyone loves the stories as much as I do.
Hi. Loved the story but just felt you rushed the sex part. It was quite a loving session and right for the story but could have been extended just a little bit more to give a fuller story ending.
Not sure where you plan to go with this, but it has lots of potential. Keep developing the characters