All Comments on 'End of the Beginning'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
HOT

VERY HOT, MAKES ME HORNY

DustiLeeDustiLeealmost 20 years ago
I really liked the story

I really liked the story. I wish you would explain a little more about who "Ian" is and where Retrained in Basic is located. I could not find it!

Dustilee

DustiLeeDustiLeeover 19 years ago
Thanks!

This is one of the reason why I love Literotica! I asked for help and got it. Thanks guys! Hope everyone loves the stories as much as I do.

EkalsEkalsover 16 years ago
Little more

Hi. Loved the story but just felt you rushed the sex part. It was quite a loving session and right for the story but could have been extended just a little bit more to give a fuller story ending.

SexySenior56SexySenior566 months ago

Not sure where you plan to go with this, but it has lots of potential. Keep developing the characters

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