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End of the Beginning

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/19/04

HOT

VERY HOT, MAKES ME HORNY

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by DustiLee06/24/04

I really liked the story

I really liked the story. I wish you would explain a little more about who "Ian" is and where Retrained in Basic is located. I could not find it!

Dustilee

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by DustiLee07/20/04

Thanks!

This is one of the reason why I love Literotica! I asked for help and got it. Thanks guys! Hope everyone loves the stories as much as I do.

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by Ekals11/20/07

Little more

Hi. Loved the story but just felt you rushed the sex part. It was quite a loving session and right for the story but could have been extended just a little bit more to give a fuller story ending.

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