All Comments on 'Amanda & Her Father Ch. 06'

by Dr Kink

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Too Much

Its just so much sex. Went into the story a tad too fast i found. There was no real character introductions, or progression into knowing how they think or feel or even how they look or what their packing. And in the beggining i had no idea what the hell they where talking about. It was very confusing. Sorry bout the nasty remarks. Keep writing, and try to get some character progression.

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