All Comments on 'My Sister's Gangbang Pt. 01'

Thanks for writing this great story. I enjoyed the progression which is really important. Well done for getting a good balance between the story and the detail of the sex. So often there is 90% story, takes an age to read then the sex is washed over. It really did it for me.

This was an EXCELLENT story. The plot materialized nicely. I'd love to more of this plot-line, it's really hot

Loved the story, but could maybe use a little more proofreading.

i want u to fuck my wife too wid ur frnds in the same manner......... reply me on bivikaburchodpati@gmail.com

Oh god that was so goooood. it got my pussy soaked and i couldnt stop cummin reading it!

Wow, you've certainly captured the eroticism of this story - I was hard from page 1 and as the story evolved my cock throbbed to be in someone's mouth. Keep up the excellent story telling.

I have fucked my sister. Came into her mouth and ass. We would play out fantasys. But to have two sisters. I would pay for that!!!where do you live?!

I have only one word for this story:FANTASTIC!!!

Damn horny tale...I was hard most of the way through....Too bad the visual of part two was shot so bad....That little beauty really fit the story

So I don't normally comment on things, but I wanted to say that I cracked up at the end. Laughed so hard I choked on my popcorn.

This was fantastic. Any story that can get me both turned on /and/ giggling deserves five stars.

WOW! You had me wet the whole time and now off to read the next part. I hope you will have a part 3 that would be awesome. Great job !

like riding my sister she has small tits and shaved crotch I havnt put it up her anus yet but been everywhere else

the story was great, I don't have any brothers so it is nice to rp in my mind...on the other hand some people are actually fucking their sister???? okay. if is consensual I guess

I have been to a lot gang bang's my sister and a friend did they were hot this is memory lane thanks Susan and Becky I wish you were here now!!!!!!

pictures or it didn't happen. :)

Why not inform up front that this story contain interracial sex?

wow wish I had a brother as nice as that and would be willing to give him anything he wanted to do this to me. I would even sign a contract to be his whore for the rest of my life and he could keep all the money he made from my body. I would only want to make him happy and to have my three opening always full of cock and sperm around the clock 24/7 365 days a year.

Amazing story. Too bad you did not continue it... I would really appreciate if it had a continue with your sisters becoming real pornstars and escorts. You could be their pimp.

Hot iv had lots of fun times with my cousin and some of his friends and became addicted to all my sex filled at the same time my mouth my kitty and my ass its incredible and i enjoy it too much. My cousin and i grew up and hung around each other a lot and we were each others first sex. I cant remember the first time i got three hole filled but we were all drunk and it involved a dare and i ended up filled with cocks and a lot of cum for most of the night and thankfully i was on contrception since i was a teen or i would have ended up very pregnant the amount that my kitty got from them. Iv thought about having more guys involved but at the minute im very happy with the three guys filling me the way they do. Im Laura i live in the UK and as today is saturday i guess tonight i will be a dirty three hole girl again tonight and i am looking forward to that a lot xxx

this story was good until I got to the final posted. I'm glad that you didn't continue. Interracial means multiple ethnicities than what you put in this story and ruined it. If this is fake you really noticeably gave up doing that. If this is a real and happened then you should be quite ashamed.

Valiant effort but in the end, BOO!

One word for this story

:GARBAGE!

Hey anonymous with the "garbage" comment :

Thanks for the 'constructive' criticism. Asshole!

And next time do like me and put your fucking name on it, not hide behind an "anonymous". Fucking coward.

was good until the actual bang. Crazy

Great story, a real dick stiffener. Got my tongue real hard too!! Wish I could have been on cleanup committee.

Everyone realises that this is fantasy?!! The story, the women who were 18 and 20 but sexualy unaware and then do whatever their brother tells them or fine with what he does to them?!! Going from sexualy immature and unaware to within a couple of weeks can outdo a seasoned sex worker and/ or a professional porn star?!! Deep thoat no problem, and orgasm from that (has she got a Clitoris their?!!) And from Semen!! Anal 1st time without lube, not a problem(and all other times) No foreplay before taking youngest sister's virginity, again no problem, as both the sister's orgasm from a drop of a hat!! Then the gang bang, dp, airtight, multiple times having never done this before, not a problem as they handle anything and orgasm over everything. Only exhaustion from all those men set them back, not for the men and also a very racist...This story is pure fantasy fiction where vaginal and anal tears (no lube at the gang bang, also no anal prep throughout the story, realistically- shitty penis's!!) No HIV, STI'S, Hepatitis B to E, No infections going from Anal sex to vaginal sex and Anal to Mouth, Herpes, Genital warts, and so on. Unfortunately people (mostly American writers and men) believe in the story, a few have questioned it, but many enthuse about it. And No Mention of Birth Control!! But understand, that like Porn, this is fantasy fiction sex, it's Not Erotic, Sexy or Real!!

Reply to the Anonymous guy with long message

I agree with you all throughout but the last line. I agree it is not real but it is erotic as many and i mean it many people lust over teen petite bodies and would like to use it. So it turns this story very erotic for them and many girls who like force fucking even though it's unethical and thousands of diseases will happen to girl and very bad bleeding both internal and external from that kind of treatment but still it is a story and it is erotic

to the anonymous commentators on Lit

Why bother you spineless morons.

Grow a pair and put your name to it.

Own your vitriol.

Try to write or post a better story yourself

Just a few suggestions to consider

Is it realistic? No, but to be honest who cares. If I wanted real, Id read the news or a history book. Sure Im not a fan of all the fetishes touched on in this story, but again who cares. To be honest, Id argue that this is one of the best stories currently on the site. Sure there are more realistic ones, and more romantic ones, and some that make you question your own sensibilities in ways this one doesn't, but then this isnt an intellectual exercise, its erotica. Its a story meant to help you stroke, and blow, and it does its job perfectly. The sex scenes are erotic, they might not be realistic, and I might be put off with the fetishes involved, but it still did the job. I stroked, I blew... job done. In my mind, that makes it a perfect story for this site. 5star.