Yes I loved it! I always love your story and this one is no exception! I loved it when she freed him then game him a blowjob so that he would not be to exsited when he fucked her keep up the good job!
The story itself was good enough, but it could have been developed much more, to make it a little hotter on the "anticipation" end of things. I would also suggest double-checking your punctuation, just a few minor things that stuck out. Always remember minor things can become really glaring errors in the midst of a good story. Keep it up though!
English
A new twist
I like this twist on the recent cuckold stories. I hope to see you continue the story.
Loved it
Yes I loved it! I always love your story and this one is no exception! I loved it when she freed him then game him a blowjob so that he would not be to exsited when he fucked her keep up the good job!
Your Most devoted fan on several sites
So-So
The story itself was good enough, but it could have been developed much more, to make it a little hotter on the "anticipation" end of things. I would also suggest double-checking your punctuation, just a few minor things that stuck out. Always remember minor things can become really glaring errors in the midst of a good story. Keep it up though!
Interesting.....
Your story was pretty good considering the cuckold for a chance is getting some fun too.
Cheers!
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