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Angie's An Adult Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Reverse_Cowboy04/21/04

A new twist

I like this twist on the recent cuckold stories. I hope to see you continue the story.

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by amasterfound04/21/04

Loved it

Yes I loved it! I always love your story and this one is no exception! I loved it when she freed him then game him a blowjob so that he would not be to exsited when he fucked her keep up the good job!

Your Most devoted fan on several sites

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by Sunnie04/22/04

So-So

The story itself was good enough, but it could have been developed much more, to make it a little hotter on the "anticipation" end of things. I would also suggest double-checking your punctuation, just a few minor things that stuck out. Always remember minor things can become really glaring errors in the midst of a good story. Keep it up though!

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by ryu7702/12/05

Interesting.....

Your story was pretty good considering the cuckold for a chance is getting some fun too.

Cheers!

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