All Comments on 'Providence Ch. 08'

Just out of curiosity, I checked out the dates of your submissions. You're doing about one chapter a month. Is that how long I'll have to wait?

Keep writing. Your story is at least as good as Shuberts.

your writing style is great. but you kind of take a while to get to the point, so i am having a hard time reading your story, because its going too slow. But im not trying to critisize, just give some hopefully helpful advice. I really like the idea of your story though.i hope i helped and didnt sound offensive.