All Comments on 'Atim'

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
excellent

A joy to read a poem about the beauty of the male form, and a poem well written.

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Turnabout

Fair play is.

Interesting words,

but you stop me with the title.

All I can find for "Atim" has to do with digital timing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Atim

Methinks I know from whence this title comes. Could it be an ode to a certain frequenter of the GB? *smiling* It is - where ever the title comes from - a lovely work. A 5.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

What is better here,

That you've chiseled out the male form

Or seem to have stopped YDD cold?

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Wonderful.

A male form ~ drawn in most lovely word pictures.

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