by Jessiebnh
nice second chapter but please dont wait so long to post the next one as you did the first.
the story has the makings of a very good tale
Great story, I want to read the next chapter now. I hope he has lots in store for her.
Kim
hap1210@hotmail.com
I am also a "victim" of sexual blackmail. Only it has taught me the eroticism of humiliation, now i am the willing sex toy of a schoolboy. 24 years old, a professional, attractive and waiting for the next call from my schoolboy
janniejackson@hotmail.com
What a "duffus". I hope you have this kid grow up soon. He's got a really hot lady on his hands, and the best he can do is "masterbate for me"?
This is one of my favorite stories on literotica...keep the chaters coming!!
You changed the name of her husband! You need to stick to one. I liked the story but that just bugged me.
Is she really going to be put under the control of a teenaged rapist for the better part of a month? I can't wait for the next thirty days...hooray!!!
Readers don't realise how long the writing process takes. How many hours in a day do you have available to write free stories? How many more hours does it take to edit a story? How many times do you need to edit a story to catch all of the errors and to clarify the meaning?
Do they think that it just flows from fingertips onto the keyboard in a perfect state without clarification and errors. How fast can you type, how often do you have to stop and think, then see to the family or friends. Oh! Going off to work, rather than keep readers satisfied with a free story?
Rant over! Thanks for the very good story! I enjoyed it and will the other chapters,
I know all about writing and the dreaded editing. So few actual hours in a day available for a hoby!